Presentation

The presentation did not go as planned at all. With a little bit more time we would have been able to improve the presentation lots. There are many things that I would have changed about the presentation if we had a second chance. One would be to add audio to the video as it was extremely ineffective without any sound. However, from doing the presentation at the stage that we did, we had a big benefit from not being finished and being given the opportunity to make improvements.

Some of the improvements that I could make were:

• Make the whole advert shorter by cutting out scenes.
• Include the website somewhere in the advert.
• Add more animation to the scenery scenes.
• Add audio to the advert throughout.
• Add writing to introduce the places in Essex.
• Add “Visit Essex” at the end.
• Create new introductions to each section of the advert.
• Make the individual renders faster.
• Add music to each section.